Sacha T. Y. Fortuné

A zany, witty telenovela of a women’s fiction, about the lies we tell each other and ourselves

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The Premise

54-year-old Kassie is on the cusp of finally taking the plunge to divorce her emotionally abusive husband Mike. A meticulous, anal-retentive planner, she has her steps laid out: file for divorce, and then move in with Chris, her 40-year-old boyfriend of five years. Just as she is about to flip the “divorce” switch, she learns that Mike has chronic kidney disease — which he has hidden from her for years.

His health issues are only the tip of the iceberg, though. As she now has occasion to venture into his private areas of their home and his office to assist him while he is at the hospital, she has the opportunity to snoop, and discovers far more than she bargained for — appalling secrets she can’t easily forgive. Now, she has to make a difficult choice — should she sacrifice her own happiness, to save his life?

The Pros

This book was certainly unique. Usually in books about divorce, there is a lot of emotional introspection and guilt — this isn’t that kind of story. This is about a marriage where the novelty has long since worn off, and infidelity and deception have become intricately interwoven into their daily lives.

I loved the characters — (Bad) Kassie, who is rapidly losing her cool as her plans implode; douchebag Mike, who is charmingly typical and benign despite his masculine manipulations; and her lover Chris, who feels like he’s gotten in over his head with a fickle older woman. I also loved that this book featured older characters with healthy sex drives.

The genre here was a mishmash of so many things. There were gems of women’s fiction spilling out even in Mike’s moments — some hilarious: his casual over-dependence on his wife for very basic things, and his wide-eyed amazement at where things in the house were located (after 30 years); but there were also some passionate romantic moments and some dramatic shockers, as well as an overall comedic wit stringing it all together.

Despite the plethora of deceit, resentment, anger, and other negative emotions, there was still a deep love — or at least a lingering fondness — and this made the characters relatable and lovable. Their contradictory behaviour is realistic — as Kassie said, to assuage Mike’s worries: “I’m divorcing you, not deserting you.” Overall, this was a wickedly fun read, and entirely engaging in its soap-opera-esque style of storytelling.

The Cons

Admittedly, there were some clunky bits of narrative where too much exposition hindered the storytelling. Also a little unsettling was the frequent jumping between viewpoints, not all of them necessary — Chris’ and Kassie’s mother’s were lacklustre by comparison to the others. At one point, I half-expected to jump into the mind of Topher the cat, because he was all over the place in just about every scene (NOT a con, by the way — he was wonderful)… but that’s how crazy the narrative was going, at times! Nevertheless, these hiccups did not spoil the overall ride.

Conclusion

This was a zany, witty telenovela of a women’s fiction, about the lies we tell each other and ourselves. The novel was engrossing, even as it veered into the territory of ridiculously coincidental. The characters were all fabulously flawed, but these flaws made them come alive, and connect with the reader.

I would highly recommend this book to anyone, but especially middle-aged, married, female readers — because of the kernels of truth we can all see in ourselves as we read these unapologetically deplorable characters. I look forward to reading more by this author.

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I chose this book out of hundreds in a book club’s library, because I hadn’t read a YA book in quite awhile, and I was feeling for something sweet and suitable for younger readers.

The Premise

14-year-old Chloe’s budding romance with long-term friend and crush Noah comes to a crashing halt when her father gets a promotion and moves their family all the way from Kansas, USA to Japan — 6393 miles away. Upset at her parents’ disregard for her social life, she is determined to dislike Japan, but the country soon works its charm on her — in particular, via her classmate Jayden, a fellow American who also ended up Japan at his parents’ will. When she has a chance to reconnect with Noah, she realises her feelings for him may no longer be the same. As Chloe makes deeper emotional connections to both Jayden and also the fellow girls in her international school of just around 20 students, she begins to learn that distance is a fact of life, and wallowing in resentment at her current location will only be to her own detriment — instead, she should appreciate the opportunity, the adventure and all the possibilities it brings.

The Pros

I really enjoyed this coming-of-age story. The character’s voice felt genuine, especially in its awkward moments of teenage angst. While the drama wasn’t huge, the author did a great job of conveying just how big every emotion felt to the mind of a 14-year-old girl — who, understandably, had a flair to be dramatic! I appreciated that while it was about a romance of sorts, this wasn’t the only theme here. There was much, much more — her relationships with her parents, her girl friends, her teachers, and the country itself. The scene-setting made everything feel tangible, and I could imagine the beauty of both the country and the woven tapestry of all the relationships tied to Chloe. The ending was a reality check for both Chloe, who hadn’t expected such a sudden change; and also for me as a reader: it suddenly grounded the book in its time and place — prior to that, this could have taken place just about anywhere at any time, as this story is so evocative of the teenage experience of young love.

The Cons

There were a few pedantic descriptions at the beginning before the book hit its stride, but these were easily forgettable because the narrative soon steals your heart. My only thought, as I was reading through, was that I hoped for more of the Japanese experience — but instead, an American girl went to an American school (in Japan) and made friends with mostly Americans, and her new love interest was an American! There was an element of diversity — Jayden was black; but beyond that, apart from the insertions of Japanese outings (mostly tourist adventures that weren’t off the beaten track), this story could easily have taken place on mainland U.S.A. I loved that Chloe grew and developed as a human being, but I didn’t feel like Japan itself had any great impact on her. While this can be attributed to the typical outlook of a self-centred teen, I kept hoping for something deep and distinctly Japanese to influence her decisions or approach to life… but she spent a year in Japan and didn’t integrate fully with the culture, as she was focused on a boy. This was my only quibble though; this lack was a mere blip amidst an excellent story.

Conclusion

This was a touching, fast-paced read that I enjoyed even as an adult, and I would highly recommend it for teenage readers as well as anyone who enjoys clean, young adult stories. Chloe is a protagonist that is easy to love — a down-to-earth, somewhat insecure, clumsy, cute confection of childhood that is on her way to maturing into a young adult. Her story resonates with many, and the writer’s voice and talent kept the book flowing nicely from beginning to end. The story and its overall message were just beautiful, and I enjoyed the emotional journey the book took me on.

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This book found its way to me via an ARC program, and I chose it because I needed a romantic comedy, after some heavy reads! This surely fit the bill.

The Premise

Romance author and average-looking 30-something Sydney falls hard and fast for the gorgeous cover model Travis at a book signing. She thinks he’s way out of his league, as he’s a bit younger and drop dead gorgeous. While she can pull herself together into a basic “pretty” if needed, she’s nothing like what she believes his typical type would be. As a model and a personal trainer, Travis’ hot body is a given… cue Sydney’s frequent lust sessions and cyber-stalking. She finally decides to purchase one of his photos to put on her book cover, which then leads to them embarking on a weekend getaway to promote her book. The event leads to a hilarious scenario with too-close-for-comfort proximity, and then she falls into bed with her hot-model crush. On the other hand, Travis is genuinely attracted to Sydney. His ex was a nightmare of pretty-on-the-outside but ugly-on-the-inside. Her possessive, jealous, overbearing nature left him wary of women. He’s still reeling from recovering from this toxic relationship, and Sydney’s down-to-earth demeanour is a breath of fresh air. Just as they’re going full steam ahead, Sydney ruins her own happily-ever-after by falling into the trap of insecurity, and Travis’ past damage crops up to impede his capacity for forgiveness.

The Pros

This was a fast-paced read that I sped through in just two days, and the humour interlaced throughout kept me reading and laughing out loud as the story developed. I absolutely loved the budding relationship between the two main characters, and the sexy moments were SO well done — and filled with humour — that I was swooning on almost every page. I thoroughly enjoyed the dialogue, even with the side characters like her best friend Harper. Sydney’s character was full of life, and I felt every emotion from awkward to supernova sexy. While there was a lot of repetition of Sydney’s “averageness” (to the point where I figured she must look like a troll!), the overall writing for this character was absolutely excellent and took me right through the novel from start to finish.

The Cons

My only real hiccup was that while “Sydney” was well developed, the “Travis” viewpoints left me wanting. For one thing, they were fewer and further between, and it’s always unsettling when we’re in one character’s head more than the other. Even when we were in Travis’ head, he didn’t seem to have a lot going on in there. Sydney’s entire life, friendships, family and livelihood bubbled through, and Travis’ were just a blip on the radar by comparison. Many times he regurgitated what had just happened, rather than moving the plot forward, and even at the culminating point, his life-altering decision was just a few lines of a “recap” rather than allowing the reader to feel all the emotion in that pivotal moment. It seemed like the authors had just painted an outline of “dream guy” — the hot guy that likes the average girl — without really committing fully. Thankfully, the awesomeness of the book permeated through Sydney, but the “Travis” hole was definitely felt… and such a shame!

Conclusion

This novel was a bit “on the nose” with the intertextuality — romance authors, writing about romance authors! They do say “write what you know” but this was quite precise. I’m pretty sure the inspiration for the book came after the writer duo were at a book signing, ogling some hot cover models! That aside, this book was thoroughly enjoyable and absolutely hilarious. The protagonist’s voice is clear and loud, especially in her insecure moments, and I loved it. I do wish we got more into the male character, but as this book does have a heavy hand with the “wish-fulfillment” in terms of inspiration, I’m guessing it was much easier to write for Sydney than for Travis. I would recommend this book to absolutely anybody above the age of 18, if they want a raunchy romp of a romantic comedy, and I can’t wait to scour the universe for more books by this writer duo!

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This book found its way to me via a book club. I was looking for a good story, and I liked the synopsis.

The Premise

Seryna has lived a safe existence throughout her teenage life, sticking to her close-knit clique of friends and enjoying her niche as an athletic girl who isn’t caught up with boys. As her senior year winds to an end, she decides to “let loose” and finds herself drunk at a party with an over-enthusiastic male friend trying to rape her — until he is yanked away by a mysterious stranger. After a few other encounters, she learns his name: Kieran. Kieran is an FBI agent investigating her family for their suspected dealings with a drug-laced type of alcohol that has been causing teenagers to behave dangerously. Kieran is rich and powerful, and despite their age difference and their different stages in life, they believe they are soulmates. She helps him with his investigation, while their romance blooms into an erotic thrill. Suddenly the “perfect” life she’d planned seems entirely different, and her loyalty to her family is soon tested, along with her plans for the future.

The Pros

This coming-of-age story was filled with tension and suspense. I enjoyed the fleshed-out characters, the FBI undercurrent tale, and the high drama of the chase. The description was so well-written that I could easily imagine the situations and every scene — from the lush hotels and cabin Kieran took her, to the waterfall that inspired the novel’s cover. The emotion was visceral, and this element of the book was amazing. I also liked that we were in Seryna’s head and experiencing things from her point of view, feeling her insecurities and doubt in her frequent self-reflective moments. Her friends also added a nice levity to the heavy drama of the story, and I liked that breath of fresh air in the snarky girl-power moments.

The Cons

However, the mounting tension eventually fell flat for me — the steady pace wound up to a fizzle of action in the last couple of chapters, and I felt like the payoff should’ve been greater. I also think the story would have been better served if it left out the “erotica” element entirely. It seemed to be a knock-off of “Fifty Shades of Grey” — being swept off her feet by a rich, handsome man who took her virginity… yeah. It just really wasn’t necessary, when the story (with maybe 10% of the steaminess) was so great on its own. It spoiled it for me, and made me dislike the protagonist. For someone who was supposed to be “strong and independent” as she kept saying she was, I did not get that at all, and I found her self-centredness off-putting. One minute she’s torn up about possibly losing a friend, and the next she’s naked with nipple clamps. It was just… too much. I felt myself actively wishing something bad would happen to her, and being disappointed when things turned out okay! Her distraction with the sex also made her less of a dependable narrator, because she was often chiding herself for not noticing things, and she also had dreams that seemed to bleed into reality. It left me feeling confused as a reader, and affected my overall enjoyment of the book.

Conclusion

I wanted to like this book so much more, because there is a lot to like here. The writing talent is excellent, but I just wish it were better directed to shape the story into something that wasn’t so derivative. If the focus was on more of the suspense and the FBI story, rather than the sex (which was already questionable, as he is older than her and investigating her family), it would have made an absolutely amazing book. I struggled with a lot here, but I do think the book is worth the read. My peeve (too much sex!) would, of course, be someone else’s enjoyment, so I’m just saying that for ME, this didn’t work. Despite my issues with the plot, the writing style and flow were captivating and kept me reading to the end. This book ends on a bit of a cliffhanger, and I am definitely going to read the sequel to see what happens next.

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I haven’t really been a huge fan of the mystery genre since my childhood days with “Nancy Drew” and “Hardy Boys”, and I only recently learned what a “cozy mystery” is. However, when I first saw this posted on a fellow author’s Instagram feed, the cover and title sparked my interest. I’m glad to report that my first foray into the “cozy mystery” genre was a hit!

The Premise

Bexley Squires, whose recent claim to journalistic fame (after exposing a sex-trafficking ring) is soon drying up financially, gets contacted by a famous actor Dean Halliwell. After a press leak, it is suspected that he is involved with the murder of a dead girl, and he wants to clear his name so as to not tarnish his career in Hollywood. He offers loads of money, and Bexley is in need of some funds to help her search for her missing sister, so the timing is perfect. Soon after she gets back to town, she gets help from her teenage crush, now Detective Grayson Rivers, who has been told to drop the case since the missing person’s identity is unknown. However, the pair of stilettos left a telltale trail, and Bexley is hot on it! Soon the Jane Doe’s identity is revealed — along with another connection Bexley didn’t expect. As she tries to uncover the truth, she is torn between who to trust, and is soon embroiled in a conspiracy of rich-and-famous male depravity.

The Pros

I loved loved loved the no-nonsense main character. She was amazing, kicking ass from left to right, plucky, tough, and not easy to faze. Her personality brimmed through the writing, and kept the story flowing nicely. Thankfully, for a female character she wasn’t *too* in her head, and was driven to uncover the facts rather than get caught up in a possible romance with either of the two male characters. There were also flashes of dark humour that had me laughing out loud — Snickers, implants! The dialogue was fresh and on point, taking the action through a nice, steady pace that unfolded as the story developed. I also appreciated that the romance didn’t overpower the story, but was still humming along nicely there in the background all the while — a perfect balance.

The Cons

I thoroughly enjoyed this book from beginning to end, but I have to admit it was quite predictable. I always love when a mystery completely shocks you when it is unveiled, and this one kind of spelled everything out along the way. By the time Bexley had figured it out, I already knew. I also wish the final bit — when everything is revealed — had a bit more action before it ended; it felt like the big lead-up fell a wee bit flat coming down to the end. Mid-action, it seemed to dive into the resolution chapter and then did a recap. I wanted more biting, snarky dialogue, some more fighting/struggling, something… well, more.

Conclusion

Despite the points I mentioned that were a bit of a let-down for me personally, this book was a great romp of a mystery read. I loved the writing talent, the humour interlaced throughout the novel, and the eventual satisfactory conclusion (though predictable). I would highly recommend this book to anyone who enjoys strong female characters, a bit of suspense, and the tiniest drop of romance to tie it all together. I couldn’t get enough of Bexley, and I would love to read more in the series.

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I chose this book from an ARC program because I was feeling to read a romance that had a deeper story than the typical boy-meets-girl and happily-ever-after, and this certainly fit the bill.

The Premise

Belle has been acting as a mother for most of her life to her teenage brother TJ, who is on the cusp of a promising future — young, bright, smart and talented; everything she’s worked so hard to build him into. Still, as a black man, he attracts unwelcome attention one evening while walking home from school, and when a white cop gives him a ride home, Belle immediately assumes the worst. Sheriff Bently, “one of the good ones” on the police force, is instantly attracted to Belle. However, he has a reputation as a playboy, and his past trauma compromises his ability to be with anyone for the long haul. Despite their racial and cultural differences, Bentley soon charms both Belle and her brother TJ, and becomes intricately woven into their lives. But just as they begin to feel like love can conquer all, tragedy strikes — showing them both that the seemingly “colourblind” society of Shattered Cove is just a mirage; its seedy underbelly shows a much more insidious reality.

The Pros

I appreciated this story for its strong and detailed character development, as well as its cultural relevance which touched on a lot of issues that are often not focused on in romances, even interracial romances. The theme of abuse is powerfully executed here; both the hero and heroine have been through a lot in the past, and Belle’s triumph of survival is a road map for Bently to also find peace with his demons. There is a good balance of romance and suspense to keep the reader’s interest throughout, and enough heart-wrenching moments to completely gut you emotionally. The story is beautiful, poignant, and relevant in today’s society; a much-needed novel for our times.

The Cons

However, I felt like I would have liked to experience more of some scenes — particularly the culminating tragic event. It was a missed opportunity that we only got Belle’s view, rather than the in-the-moment view of Bentley’s side as well; and while this may fall into many readers’ “Pros” list, for me “less is more” with regard to the sexy scenes. A good bit of the book’s (fairly long) real estate was dedicated to panty-melting, dick-throbbing moments — and the story itself was much, much more interesting than that. Also, there were some moments of political relevance (hair touching, Juneteenth, not “seeing” colour) that I wish were more nuanced; instead they were dropped in almost like an “after-school special” (note: I am a reader of colour, and this may have influenced my preferences to want these to be done exceptionally, exceptionally well!)

Conclusion

Despite my personal preferences, I think this story on the whole is excellent. It takes the reader on an entire emotional journey from beginning to end, and it is easy to get lost in these characters. It makes you think and feel things, long after the last page. Though the eventual conclusion seemed entirely unlikely, it poses a what-if question to the reader — what if, just once, after a tragic error, the law gets it right? I would recommend this book to anyone who wants a story for today’s world, especially if you like interracial romances and damaged characters who triumph over adversity.

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I grabbed a copy of this book via an ARC program. Usually a mob plot is a hard “no” for me — I prefer to watch that kind of content on TV. But the prologue blew me away, and I took a leap of faith. I’m so glad I did.

The Premise

Still reeling from a break-up that involved her taking a broom to her ex’s naked cheating ass, Katie is clearly a force to be reckoned with in her own right. As she pauses at a stoplight with her character of a vehicle (literally, it has a name: Kato), injured FBI agent Luc hops in to escape from the bad guys — and in an instant, Katie’s life changes. Guns, bullets, mobsters and a high-speed car chase — the whole nine yards — quickly ensue, and it screeches to a halt as she knocks the mobster’s vehicle into a quarry pit. The psycho mobster, embarrassed to be shown up like that in front of his mob family and also the police, launches a vendetta against her. Luc takes her into hiding at his castle (that’s right — he lives in a castle) which is guarded by his ginormous dog Spot. However, as they get to know each other, Luc soon realises she isn’t a stranger but she is linked to someone he’s known all his life, and they already have a shared past. Things soon heat up between them, and the danger seems to be momentarily forgotten — but meanwhile, the mobsters are on their trail, and feisty Katie and damaged Luc soon find themselves in way over their heads.

The Pros

This book was insane — in a good way. There was hilarious comedy, fast-paced action, on-the-edge-of-your-seat suspense, fresh dialogue, and characters that kept me turning the pages frantically to see how it would end up. There was so much here that my head was spinning. One minute there are steamy sexy moments, followed by slapstick comedy, and then in come the blazing guns. I felt like I had whiplash, as it went from one thing to the other. There was never a dull moment. I also appreciated that there were some serious issues here, with the foster care background of abuse and long-term marriage relationship issues, but these did not impinge on the overall levity. The characterisation was well done, as I could easily envision the two leads, and there were also a few side characters that stole the show. Even Spot was right there in the middle of everything, a character in her own right — a nice touch!

The Cons

I loved this book, but a mobster book it is not. Mind you, I’m not a fan of mobster books, so this was fine by me. And while it held my interest, the plot seemed at times like it was all over the place. It felt like the author was trying to shove it all in, and honestly — it wasn’t necessary. There was more than enough here to make an amazing book, and all the add-ons just took away from the overall effect. I could have easily chopped off about 10-20% and given this book 5 stars. The mother’s relationship issues I didn’t really care for, the sister’s unrequited love arc didn’t seem necessary, and the hero’s waffling back and forth at the end just didn’t make sense at that point. They’d already been through so much, and suddenly he’s back to square one wallowing in self-doubt. There were also some moments that were funny but seemed entirely unlikely — goading a mobster generally isn’t wise; and some plot choices that I just wish had been left out.

Conclusion

This was a thoroughly enjoyable read, despite my issues I had with the overall plot. I want more of it, so much more. I want more of this author. I want to be inside that head of hers. She is crazy talented, to create a story with so many elements and somehow tie them all in together. I would recommend this book to anyone who needs a burst-your-sides laugh of a rollicking read, with a little sprinkling of psycho mobsters. Yeah, who needs mobsters when you have all the other amazing things happening here?! Despite my hefty “Cons” column, this book was STILL amazing. So trust me, it’s worth the read!

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This book came to me via an ARC program, and I chose it because I was in the mood for a romantic comedy. However it turned out to be less comedy than I had anticipated.

The Premise

Fred (short for Fredericka) returns to Blue Falls, en route to New York but in need of a respite to have a base while she looks for work — not to mention, to gather her wits after the end of a bad romance. Six months later, she winds up drunk at a party, with a slobbering mess of a kisser, and she is rescued by “Beast”, a seven-foot tall mute gentle giant who is the foster brother of Grace, who lives with Fred and her “Granny” with whom she’s been staying. Beast asks her to help him build his communication skills with dating, but this soon evolves into much more. Knowing she plans to leave, Fred is tugged between this budding romance and the call of the outside world. Beast can’t come with her because his damaged past ties him to Grace and their other foster brother Jude — but nerdelicious Fred still isn’t giving up hope.

The Pros

I really appreciated that this story had an unlikely hero and heroine. Beast’s lacking vocal communication skills are a result of past trauma, and Fred is the polar opposite: she can’t shut up. The nerdy fandom is running at a constant pace in her mind. Somehow, these two manage to find a middle ground where they communicate through technology and sign language. Apart from the romance, I also liked the side story of the foster children who stick by each other — this was endearing and very touching. As the story wound to its eventual end, I loved that Beast worked towards transforming himself and overcoming his past issues, so he could communicate better with Fred.

The Cons

While I liked the overall story, I was expecting more comedy. It started off hilarious, and then from that point, it was back-and-forth with a blossoming romance that was sweet, and sad, and sexy — but not really funny. Beyond that letdown, I was also hoping for more conflict between the two main characters, but Beast just seemed like the perfect boyfriend, and Fred the perfect quirky chick — their only challenge was distance, which was easily solved. Another issue for me was that the POV shifted coming down to the end — without warning. Suddenly we were in Beast’s head — WTF? Why? When this happened, I actually wished that the entire novel had been split half and half, rather than just this one solo chapter dangling there by its lonesome. This felt like a missed opportunity, as it could have made an even better story.

Conclusion

This was a good read, but I wanted a bit more. I liked the stream-of-consciousness narrative with dollops of references here and there (some of them over my head!) to align with the book’s title “Nerdelicious”, and I can see many readers thoroughly enjoying this book because they can connect with these types of characters. For me it was a bit lacklustre as I expected something different, but I would still highly recommend this book to anyone who is looking for a light read with refreshing characters.

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This book came to me via an ARC program, and I chose it because I was in the mood for a clean, wholesome romance.

The Premise

Lucy returns to her small-town home of Angel Lake, jilted by a bad work experience and in need of a change. She’s been a “hot-foot” girl for over a decade, bitten by the wanderlust bug that has taken her around the world and back as a renowned photographer. Once home, she quickly gets swept up into a romance with boy-next-door Alex, who is now the town sheriff. Meanwhile, her family doesn’t expect her to stick around, and Alex claims he doesn’t need her to — but he’s clearly lying to himself, because he’s been in love with her since they were twelve. As Lucy tries to “fix” everyone in her family around her, she soon realises that who she really needs to fix is herself — she needs to deal with her past demons, if she wants a chance to fit into her family and to be with the man she loves.

The Pros

This was a sweet, wholesome romance that is easy to love, with a hero and heroine that you immediately hope will get their act together because they’re clearly perfect for each other despite the naysayers on both ends among their respective families. I appreciated that the story included a lot of challenges that the family on the whole faces — marriage difficulties, behavioural disorders, mental health issues, parent abandonment, and much more. There was enough here to keep the reader’s interest beyond just the main relationship, and the interactions with their families also gave a better idea of who each main character was. There was also an ongoing mystery to be uncovered concerning the town vandal, so this added an extra element of suspense.

The Cons

While I enjoyed the story and it is well written, I really kept hoping for more conflict between the two main characters. They get together quickly, neither of them seem to have any real character flaws, and the “big event” that breaks them up was a misunderstanding that was easily resolved. I felt as though the tension and drama were humming along merrily, but I kept expecting more of an explosion of emotion at some point, which in the end I didn’t feel. The story was all-around a good one, but it was missing some oomph in the romance area for me.

Conclusion

While it didn’t rock my world personally as I was expecting something shocking, I still really appreciated this sweet, small-town romance, and would recommend it to anyone who’s looking to fall in love with an entire family with their own respective dramas. I can see this kind of story easily translated to a TV series, as it has so many elements from all the family members — but as a book, it just had so much other things going on that it impinged on the main romance. At its heart, it is an emotional journey of healing from the past damage families do to each other. There is a lot to love here, and despite the variety of heavy topics, it is a light read that will leave you with a warm, fuzzy feeling. I would love to read more by this talented author, and I just hope that the next one wows me a bit more.

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I’ve had varied reads recently, but I’m getting back to my goal of understanding tropes to help develop and/or market my own writing, which is trope-free: unpredictable, real-life romance with dubious “heroes/heroines”. I liked the premise of this one because I hadn’t read a “twin” trope to date, so it drew my interest.

The Premise

Nicole abandons her wedding with quite possibly the largest douchebag known to man — Marcus hasn’t just slept with a friend or family member, but he’s actually gotten her identical twin sister pregnant. A string of events leads Nicole to have her sister Veronica’s purse with her passport and ticket to a new place, and it seems like the best idea to get away for awhile. Her heart splintering among a truckload of alcohol, she has a wild night with a sexy stranger, Ethan — whose name she doesn’t discover until the next day, when she’s on his doorstep about to become his daughter’s new nanny. By that time it’s already far too late to back out, because she’s promised his sick mother that she’ll take her sister’s place and identity along with the new job. Ethan has no room in his heart for a woman, after his wife destroyed his faith in love even before her death. But Nicole’s sweet allure still drags him in, and she also can’t resist him — but her secrets threaten to destroy everything.

The Pros

I liked that this trope-filled romance featured several heavy topics and still managed to balance them with grace and care. Mental health, depression, sibling rivalry, addiction, infidelity, crumbling relationships, and many more issues all crossed the pages without weighing down the entire premise of the romance. The story was well fleshed out around these issues, without making them the core focus — and at the same time, prominently displayed enough to give the story substance. I also appreciated that the sexy moments were scintillating, without being overdone. The side characters brought enough additional flavour — the other Jackson siblings, the cute daughter Lilly, the stalwart matriarch, and the women including her friend Teagan and sister Veronica. The small town gossip and the weather also rounded out this story to position the reader in the heart of things, and it was well written.

The Cons

Despite the writing talent, some things bothered me. It seemed entirely out of character that a doctor — and in this case an ob/gyn! — would do anything with someone who was so clearly drunk that he had to rescue her from another guy moments earlier. Impaired judgement coupled with insta-love (when the characters don’t even know each other’s names) just isn’t a scenario that should be overlooked in a romance book, and while I’m not usually ruffled by these things, it stood out here. Combining medication with alcohol was another questionable judgement call in our heroine — not to mention dubious clarification of birth control coverage stood out with the hero (again, he’s an ob/gyn!)

In general, as a trope-filled romance, I expected to like the two main characters more. But it didn’t seem like Nicole had experienced any growth or change by the novel’s end. She was far too forgiving and had no backbone with her sister, and very little even with Ethan. Meanwhile, Ethan slut-shamed her and was overly possessive. I don’t mind flawed characters — hell, I write them! — but these aren’t the kind of flaws I can forgive in a typical romance. If it were any other type of novel, I would’ve been thrilled at the complexity… but these deviations were bothersome because it was supposed to be considerably light and fluffy. Indeed, like the title — I felt like it was “the wrong kind” of love, in more ways than one!

Conclusion

Despite these significant cons of the story, I still gave this a fairly good rating because I did enjoy it and it kept my interest. I was just disappointed because I really wanted to rate this so, so, much higher. There was potential here for something amazing, because the technical aspect of writing — the highs, the lows, the conflict, the tension, the dialogue… those all came together perfectly. But the actual plot fell short of rocking my world. My heart just wasn’t bursting at the seams for this couple to get together. Nevertheless these may be my own personal issues, and I would still highly recommend this book to anyone who appreciates a good, well-written story. I’m also looking forward to other books in this series, as I enjoyed the introductions to other characters.

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This came to me via a book club, and I chose it because I was in the mood for a secret-baby romance with a twist, and this seemed to fit the bill. I noticed the blurb doesn’t mention a big factor, which makes it hard to write a review without giving away a spoiler, but I’ll try.

The Premise

Upon receipt of long-lost letters from decades ago, Sara realises that the entire life she built for herself and her daughter Paula was based on lies. When her mother admits to deceiving her by intercepting their communication in order to protect her underage teenage daughter from getting involved with an older man, Sara struggles to forgive her in the present, but more importantly — she now learns that her first love did not betray her when he left for the military and lost contact with her prior to his death. Their child is now an adult, but Sara realises it may be time to seek out her past lover Paul’s family and let them know about Paula. But when she goes there, she finds much more than she had ever bargained for — and her own lies catch up to her as she tries to open her heart to a second-chance romance.

The Pros

Generally the story was good, and I enjoyed each of the main characters and understood their motivations for behaving the way they did. The author took time to develop each character, even the side characters. There were very realistic moments that you usually won’t find in a typical romance, and I appreciated the inclusion of these. All of the relationships were heavily fraught with emotional angst: Paula on the cusp of making a big leap in her love life, Sara and Matthew in an older/younger friendship/relationship that isn’t clearly defined, Sara and her mother trying to heal after decades of lies crumble on them both. The tension was well developed, and there were a few scenes in particular that had me hanging off the edge of my seat — well done!

The Cons

However, there were a few choppy parts in terms of pacing — one moment we’re experiencing every single nuance of emotion with the characters, and the next I’m wishing I knew more about what had happened in the past few weeks. Also, the narrative was written in third person and though there were so many characters here that first-person wouldn’t have been feasible, still I wished it particularly during the sexy or highly dramatic moments, because it’s hard to convey all this emotion in the third person — it resulted in characters actually speaking aloud their feelings, instead of just feeling them and keeping them privy to the reader.

Conclusion

I enjoyed this second-chance, secret-baby, military romance a lot, and appreciated that despite ticking the boxes in terms of tropes, there was a lot of originality here that breathed through the novel and kept me interested. It was an easy read, and well fleshed out to be much, much more than just a romance. There are heavy elements of women’s fiction here, with all the female relationships — Sara and her mother, Paula and Sara, and even the developing relationship between Sara and her business partner. There was also a focus on the male relationships, which I liked as well. I would recommend this book to anyone who appreciates a good story with an emotional overload.

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I have to admit — this was a bit of a strange read for me. The author was looking for her reader tribe, and while that may not be me personally, I was happy to read and review. She classes it “sad, scary stories for children” and since I enjoyed R. L. Stine and other typical children’s fiction in that genre as a child, I figured I would give it a try.

The Premise

Mother leaves her two children, Marcus and Gabe, home alone, making them swear not to open the door for anyone — no matter whom. Marcus is fiercely protective of his little brother, and spends the evening battling with his wits against a strange bony girl creature he sees through the peephole. As time wears on, various characters show up trying to convince him to open the door. Meanwhile, there is a spidery voice in his head that frightens him to the core, telling him there is already someone inside the apartment. There are traces of this unknown person: large men’s shoes, footprints, and a man singing while he shaves. And amidst all of this, his little brother may be hurtling into danger if Marcus doesn’t make the right decision whether or not to open the door.

The Pros

The story kept my interest and I read it through quickly (it’s pretty short), eager to get to the end. I enjoyed the tension building: the reader feels Marcus’ frustration at feeling like he is being tricked by the bony girl, and also his devotion to his little brother. I also looked forward to the payoff of the horror, and the language kept this flow going with sentences like: “This is how terrible things usually start: with one disobeying little child” and “This room seems so closed that Mother’s scent is a prisoner in it, not a happy resident“. The way it is written seems like a child’s voice as the author, and that was refreshing to have a story written in this way. The language weaves in and out with a nice fluidity that seemed like this story would serve well as a “ghost story” read out around a campfire for teenagers, perhaps. The story’s twist was truly unexpected. At one point I actually imagined it the other way around (you have to read it to understand).

The Cons

I liked the premise, but there was a bit lacking for me to give this perhaps an extra star. There is a prologue that warns that all will never be explained: “Secret by secret, a story can grow a shadow as important as the story itself.” I loved this in theory and was eager to dive in despite that disclaimer, but the actual execution left me with far too much to ponder. I’m also still trying to figure out who the ideal reader may be. An adult may be wary of reading a story to a child where there seems to be abuse or neglect (these children seem very young to be left alone), and a child may not fully appreciate the artistry behind the way it is told and the eventual “big reveal”.

Conclusion

Overall this was an interesting story about the power of imagination, curiosity, and fear — and the cocktail of emotion this combination brings. The author was right in classifying her story as a “sad, scary story” for children. There are elements here that would truly frighten children, and it can lead to nightmares. But there are also lessons to be learnt, and these lessons are positive — just not all fully revealed, so it was unsettling. There is a lot to like here, if you are the ideal reader. I would recommend to a preteen or teenager who likes scary stories.

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This book came to me via an ARC program, and I chose it because I was looking for a touching women’s fiction novel to read. This was an easy read that I devoured in two days and it certainly did not disappoint.

The Premise

“When Robins Appear” is the heartbreakingly beautiful tale of a mother and a daughter, at two ends of the spectrum in terms of their loves and their lives. It is told in the first-person point of view from both mother and daughter: Deborah, who is on the cusp of becoming an “empty nester”; and Amanda, who has had the benefit of a lovely family home as the only child of two successful, hardworking people with a longstanding, loving marriage. When Amanda meets Graham — the laidback, carefree guy and polar opposite of her jock ex-boyfriend Jack, her mother Deb is alarmed. Her own demons from her past lead her to believe that Graham will be her daughter’s demise, and she wants to protect her. But the tragedy awaiting the family is far different than Deb could ever imagine.

The Pros

I really enjoyed the development of each character in this novel. The author does this effortlessly: we immediately understand that Richard’s role in the family is on the peripheries; the real story here is the mother-daughter relationship, which seesaws from love and affection to frustration and anger. The reader is able to empathise fully with both main characters — the mother’s painful past that impedes her present willingness to trust her daughter, and her daughter’s rebellion to be with the man she loves. The language is exquisite and suits the tale perfectly, and the eventual turn of events is symbolic and beautiful. I also appreciated the side characters’ development: from Amanda’s friend with religious-zealot abusive parents, to Graham’s friend in a unstable home, to Amanda’s motherly-type sister Merritt, to Graham’s hippie parents, and even Deb’s past love —  each character is allowed to fully bloom to fill his/her space. For even the shortest of scenes — a heartbreaking event of loss in her past — the reader can visualise the sibling relationship and Deb’s oblivious innocence and regret. The writing talent is palpable, and breathes throughout the entire novel, in turn leaving the reader breathless by the story’s eventual end.

The Cons

The journey of the novel from beginning to end was well executed, but the storyline itself has been told many times before, and did not deviate much from what I was expecting. I would also have liked the ending to a bit more fleshed out. The cadence shifts so drastically that it left many questions unanswered, and while I appreciate that this reflects real life, I wanted maybe a chapter or two more rather than the succinct wrap-up.

Conclusion

The author presents a powerful narrative that will stay with me for quite some time. There are nuances and intricacies of writing here that were expertly placed to lead the reader through the plot. The way the story is told makes all the difference, because a tried-and-true tale can gain much levity and poignance once done right. And this author does it very, very right. I would recommend this book to anyone who needs a good story — but keep your tissues handy.

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We don’t think twice about creating an entire genre for a broad-spectrum term “Women’s Fiction” but when it comes to fiction for men it’s assumed that there is no such specific thing. But though I labelled it “Family Life Fiction” which would be more understandable at a glance, this really needs to be in its own category.

*Disclaimer: This book came to me via a book club, and I’m thrilled it did because if I hadn’t already picked it up with the intention of reviewing it, I honestly doubt I would have made it to the end. And I’m so, so glad I did!*

The Premise:

Single father Ben is raising his daughter Sophia with a will and a hope and a prayer he doesn’t literally go mad before he gets her to adulthood. With a truckload of abandonment issues and insanity-laced baggage in his past, he’s dedicated himself to “getting her on that lifeboat” and holding himself together until he does. In the meanwhile, he’s avoiding substances so he can stay lucid, and he’s seeing a shrink to keep his head straight as best as he can. Happening simultaneously as she ages from doe-eyed innocence into a teenager and then a young woman, Ben struggles with a relationship he never got over — “the one that got away” Anna.

…Except the “one that got away” — who is now married to his supposed “best friend” — hasn’t gone anywhere. As they reconnect after a long period and then stay in touch throughout the years, the anguish builds as they ruminate over the mistakes made, the regrets that never die, and the past lives not lived.

The Pros:

The prose is just… in a word: excellent. The reader is right there with every moment, feeling the seesaw of Ben’s emotions — his driven nature to be all he can be for his daughter, his goofy dad moments, his anguish over the foolish errors of youth, and the ceaseless tug of war with himself as he fights the undying umbilical pull to the love of his life. There were moments that just stop you in your tracks:

The incessant anxiety:

“It feels like the shelf life of my sanity is expiring”

“I don’t think I’d ever intentionally try to kill myself” […with sleeping pills etc. but while crossing the road or driving…] “I fall into a kind of passive disregard for my safety.”

Spending time in the present, with his past lover:

“I miss her. I even miss the excruciating awkwardness of trying to just be friends”

“Damn this perfect moment. Like, how dare this taste so real.”

Losing touch with his daughter:

“I know it’s the push and pull of adolescence, but I can’t tell anymore when she wants me to leave her alone, or when she needs me”

“No one prepares you for when your kid start to forget all those things you shared. Memories you hold onto like a man overboard clutching a lifesaver. But for your kid, it just vanishes like it was never there. It’s like you get dementia at both ends of your life”

And even about the process of writing itself:

“I think to myself I’ve got to remember what this feels like so I can write about it later.”

“No one understands why writers write, and they always want to know if you’re making a living off it. Like that’s relevant. I don’t write for money, and I don’t need someone to tell me it’s good.”

There is a particular craft of a writer to throw those moments out there that are instantly awe-inspiring, and I enjoyed all of that thoroughly. I also appreciated how no character in this sordid tale was necessarily evil. They were all just living their own versions of the same reality, much of which was occluded from Ben until the very end. There are no heroes or heroines here — which I always, always echo in my own role as a writer of “real-life romance” as I always love a book with that overriding message. We are all just fighting our own demons.

The Cons:

While I loved the general cadence of this book, the pacing took some getting used to. It travels the span of quite a long period of time, and it reads like a memoir of sorts as it felt like the writer put a LOT of himself into it. For instance, while all the musical references seamlessly interwoven enriched the story greatly (showcasing the writer’s own background as a musician), a lot of the references would go completely over any average reader’s head. I can see this translating exceptionally well for a film, but I personally didn’t need so much of it in a book. This was an extremely tiny hiccup, though. Overall the book was a joy to journey through, and the ending was just perfect.

Conclusion:

This was an exceptional read and I can see this story staying with me for quite awhile. The author’s voice is prominent, clear, and painfully poignant. It’s also incredibly, incredibly male — and I think men (especially fathers) could benefit so much from reading this. Despite some lags in the flow from time to time, the journey was worth taking. You need to be in the mood for this type of read, because it packs a seriously emotional punch. Nevertheless you do get that payoff in the end, so hang in there. I’ll leave you with one more from the author’s literary playbook:

“If love is meant to be, it’ll be. I don’t need it to survive anymore.”

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As a fellow author, it’s one thing to review what draws my fancy at my own leisure, but it’s quite another when I open a book I’ve already promised to review (with no small amount of trepidation, I might add). You see, I’ve been burnt before — saddled with a novel that I dread finishing, and flailing to find something salvageable to comment on!

I need not have worried, in this case. I came across the book’s description on a Facebook writers’ group, and was instantly drawn in. And I am so, so thankful I took the chance on this not-yet-published novel.

The Premise

Stunning from beginning to end, “Ellipsis” charts the trajectory of a young woman from the overconfident highs of her early adulthood and passionate affair with a foreigner, through the debilitating grief and profound loss of a loved one, and timid emergence and blossoming into a new sense of self and purpose. Eloquently written and aptly described, there is so much substance here — an overabundance of themes intricately woven into the lives of these characters: beauty, violence, levity, loss, friendship, peace.

The Pros

I really liked the fact that all of these characters felt incredibly real. The cast is diverse in so many ways, and each was fully sketched and crafted — fabulously flawed, but resplendently relatable. From the Armenian lover, to the reclusive but endearing art teacher, to the officer’s dutiful but lingering gaze, and even the broad range of reactions from the grieving families; there is a vivid thread of description here that many authors fail to do well. Here, it is effortless, and I can easily imagine every character — her son’s lackadaisical boyhood sweet mustiness, her supposedly functional family’s emotively stunted responses, and the scared child clinging desperately on the other end of the line.

The writing meanders along with grace, style, and those tiny nuances of women’s fiction moments that are pure gold: revelling in the motherhood moment of feeling like “I’ve won”, the prickly feeling of the awareness of a lover’s infidelity, the nasty undercurrent of nonchalance while observing others’ lives around you — those lives not lived: “sometimes you don’t ride off into the sunset entirely, and that was okay”.

There is so much story here — so many avenues to explore, that I was thrilled to relish every kernel of life slowly revealed as the tale developed. The pacing has distinct shifts but despite the various phases of its life cycle, it does not lag or rush but buds and blooms, sprouting tendrils of life just like the flower on the novel’s cover.

Normally I have a “Cons” section, but I can’t with any real sense of conviction pick this apart to call out a flaw worth mentioning. I read it through quickly and thoroughly enjoyed the ride, revelling in the journey the author took me on.

Conclusion

This is a book I can easily see translated to film, or read for a Literature class or book club. There is a lot to unpack, and so many lessons to be learnt here. There is so much heart in this tale that at times it was simply breathtaking. There is joy; a slight blip of hope humming under our heroine’s skin: hope to make a difference, hope to change a life, hope to find purpose despite her own tragedy. And there is love here; a profound love of self that must fight its way to the surface and overcome. This is a book I will gladly re-read, time and time again.

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I won’t lie — this book started off a bit rocky with me, because it felt like I’d been dumped into the mind of a crazy person! But I’m glad I stuck it out, because I wound up enjoying it quite a lot.

*Disclaimer: as part of a book club, I chose this one out of hundreds of books because I was in the mood for something funny, for a change! And it did not disappoint.*

The Premise

Never-been-anywhere-or-done-anything-of-significance Lucy decides to do a complete 180-degree turn from her usual character and drop everything to hop on board the “backup” honeymoon in London because her sister forgot to cancel it. The hotel has strict rules that it must be for honeymooners only, so Lucy tells a “little white lie” that soon develops into a messy situation when an old friend from school, Cary, swoops in to play along as her husband in a marriage of convenience so he can escape the horrors of hostel life. But hotel concierge Oliver is on their trail, aware that something just doesn’t add up…

The Pros

This was light-hearted and genuinely funny, and had a distinct tinge of the kind of brain-dump silliness that I’ve always enjoyed with the Sophie Kinsella’s “Shopaholic” series. It’s an easy comparison, because Lucy is in her head and quirkily stumbling along with every move. I enjoyed the London and Paris scenes, especially as I’ve been to both places, and the humour kept me reading the book which I flipped through in a couple of hours. It’s a nice, jaunty read with no lulls, and the characters are lively. The side relationships and her budding friendships with both male leads felt genuine, and there were many moments of levity despite the seriousness at the peak of the action.

The Cons

While I enjoyed the story, the writing did seem all over the place at times! There were also some parts that seemed tossed in with side characters having their own thing going on, and it took away from some of the pacing. For example, all the messages from her family were distracting me from the plot, and I could have done with a lot less of that to keep me in the thick of things! But these are minor issues that did not negate the wonderful ride of the story overall.

Conclusion

All in all, this was a good, fun and easy read. Despite some hiccups, I did not stop reading it at all, and I relished the end where everything wrapped up nicely and it all fell into place. It was a little disorienting to be in the character’s head along with all the meandering thoughts, but it was a fun escape and nice travel story. I look forward to more from this author.

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There’s something disturbing and beautiful about this novel, despite the seemingly lacklustre rating.

Bear in mind I’m a picky reader, and I know exactly what I loved and didn’t love about it, which I’m happy to share with you so that you can make up your own mind. I can see that this would be an excellent and empowering book for some women, but it fell short for me personally due to my own preferences.

*Disclaimer: as part of a book club, I chose this one out of hundreds of books because I loved the premise and I was looking for something with NO TROPES for a change! I also write women’s fiction/romance without tropes, so reading this kind of book was part of my journey to develop my own writing.*

The Premise:

Told through two characters in the third person “Olivia” and “She”, the novel traces a relationship from the onset of passion to the nosedive of marriage fraught with a seemingly schizophrenic man. One minute he’s hot and the other he’s abrasive and cold. It’s unclear what his motivations are, and he is frustrating the woman he is with. I felt just as confused as the female character(s). Despite strong friendships and heartwarming relationships with her kids, this man is ruling her emotions and has her doubting who she is and if she deserves love.

The Pros:

I really enjoyed reading a novel with NO TROPES for a change. There was no destination that screamed “HAPPILY EVER AFTER, right this way”. From the very title, you know it’s a CAUTIONARY TALE, so you don’t expect it to end in anything fluffy. The writer captured some of the nuances of conversation and actions in a relationship where a man leaves a woman in debilitating mistrust of her own memory. The stream-of-consciousness laced with insecurity is something that resonates with every woman. I also enjoyed the fact that there were a lot of loose ends never figured out. Despite not knowing, “She” went with her gut in the end. In real life, sometimes there aren’t any answers. So while it felt unsettling, that was the whole point.

The Cons:

While I liked the chapter separations of “She” and “Olivia”, and I liked the general idea of what was done stylistically, the execution left a bit to be desired. I had a sensation of a general malaise with the jumping to and fro. It felt like things were glossed over or rushed in an effort to get to the end of the story. The man’s issues in his past were blurted out, rather than “discovered” — as were many other key elements of the story, which combined to dilute the tension that I would have liked to feel building up. Some readers prefer this style, but it was not my own preference so it led to disappointment overall. I really wanted to FEEL the emotions, not just read about them.

Conclusion:

Nevertheless, the overall message is beautiful: “She” could be any of us. There are so many “She”s around us: women in situations that they know are not healthy for them, but they stay anyway because they are afraid of being alone. I can see how this book can land in the hands of a woman in the same situation, and it can be just what she needs to give herself a kick in the pants to get the hell away from a toxic relationship. I do think this book is worth giving a try, or passing it along to a female friend who you think may get something out of it.

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It was refreshing for me — after a litany of heavy-handed bad boy tropes and expletives in my recent reads — to dive into this sweet story.

Disclaimer: I was looking for a sweet romance story, in an effort to improve my own writing. I write “real-life romance” which has some very sweet elements with family and marriage relationships, and I wanted to see a good example of the difference between the raunchier stories and the sweet/clean elements.

The Premise

Marina has escaped an abusive relationship with the only thing that matters: a child… albeit a mute, terrified child who has no blood relation to her. Four-year-old Kellyn is the only thing that links her to her past: a righteous dick of a powerfully-connected man who doesn’t deserve to walk the face of the earth. Still, she’s stayed close to him despite a flimsy restraining order she knows won’t be enforced, because of the child’s therapy and wellbeing needs.

From the outset this strange arrangement is endearing, if a little odd — she’s well aware that he can find her in a heartbeat, which of course he soon does, particularly when he hears about the new man in her life: her next-door neighbour and the town sheriff, Aiden.

The Pros

Aiden was a breath of fresh air, and I thoroughly enjoyed how the writer focused on him building a relationship with the little girl, not just her mother. He fell in love with them both: “his girls”. The town was also a breezy idyllic love-zone that welcomed and facilitated Marina’s career, which was cute if a little saccharine-sweet.

There are a lot of themes to unpack here, but the basic one that came to mind was female empowerment. Though Aiden is a cop, he is not the alpha hero here to save the day. Marina is the one who kicks ass from the beginning to the end of this tale — as she should be. She is “a victor, not a victim” as she reminds herself constantly. I liked that she didn’t need to be rescued. This story could have easily gone another way… particularly with his profession as a cop.

Aiden’s purpose in her life is not to rescue her, but to rebuild her faith in love. I loved the overall premise, and even though the writing veered into the land of the flowery from time to time — literally: they bond over gardening! — the meaty chunks of a love story were nice enough to bite into. There is also a heart-burstingly, beautiful moment where Kellyn finds her voice, which was beautifully done.

The Cons

So why didn’t I score it higher? Well, I’m a picky reader, and some things bothered me.

Firstly, some of the dialogue was a little lacklustre, and dreamboat Aiden and survivor Marina didn’t seem to have any character flaws. He was a good guy, she was an abused woman. I kept hoping for more character development, but the most character development was in poor little Kellyn, who emerges out of her shell and finds her voice when it is most needed. But clearly (and unfortunately) the kid was the star here, not the two leads.

Finally, there was more than enough story without having them jumping each other’s bones. Like, at all. I’m no prude and I enjoy a good hay-romp read from time to time, but it felt misplaced here somehow. Coming out from physical and sexual abuse, it was just… jarring. I wasn’t hungry for those scenes. I could have easily have done without any of the sex until the very, very end, if at all. After Marina found her strength. After she gets rid of the loser ex. After Kellyn found her voice. Just… after.

Conclusion

Despite those key issues which combined to knock off a whole star for me, I did really enjoy the book, and I flew through it in just two days. The writing style and flow were great, and it is indeed heartwarming and very, very sweet. Totally worth the read, and I look forward to more from the author. I just hope there’s a wee bit more depth the next time around, because there was so much potential here for something really amazing.

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While I enjoyed this book for the most part, I must admit I’m a little disappointed because I really wanted to love it more.

Again, I should share the disclaimer that I was looking for tropes, to widen my own horizon as a writer of “real-life romance”.

The Premise

It begins promisingly enough with former SEAL guy Maddox knocking on Bridget’s door and wheedling his way in to stay although she isn’t technically open yet, with the magic words: “I’ve got tools.” They proceed to embark on a friendship where he helps her get her inn ready and she helps him with research for his new ice-cream business. It’s cute and sweet, but not really overly dramatic. Their lust with each other rapidly turns into love (mind you: all of this develops over a few days) when they connect through sharing their pasts.

The Pros & Cons

A slight miscommunication leads Bridget to believe he’s taken, when he’s not, and this is the entire premise of the tension of the book. This was my issue here — it was really drawn out for far too long. The blurb led me to believe he actually was taken, and he wasn’t. I felt cheated for being led to believe this, because I was hoping for more drama in this regard. So, about the drama… there just… well, wasn’t any.

The back story and mystery were all nicely done — his reasons for leaving the SEALS, her mystery about her family, etc etc. There is a lot of story here, and it is all very sweet. The story is technically very well-written, the descriptions were lovely and I could imagine the town and its military events… but the dialogue just didn’t take me all the way there. The sex scenes were okay, but again I wasn’t swept away. I was just relieved that the miscommunication was over so they could finally get to the sex part! Overall, the story was going quite good, I was enjoying the characters… but I just wasn’t gripping onto the edge of my seat.

The book does end on a cliffhanger, which I’m sure will annoy readers everywhere because the couple’s entire story is complete, except for that nugget of information not shared (you’re supposed to invest in further books in the series to find out about it). I don’t mind cliffhangers but I do have a slight issue with this. If you’re going to end on a cliffhanger (which I’ve done, in my own books) it has to be a WHOPPER of a cliffhanger where there is a romantic “Will they… won’t they???” and in this case, it just wasn’t that. The entire romance story was wound up into the Happily Ever After, and still there was something never explained. If you can tolerate that, then this book won’t frustrate you.

Conclusion

For me, this book still starred quite highly because the writing was good and the story kept me interested all the way through. I appreciated that the male lead wasn’t SUPER alpha, and that the female lead had a lot of endearing qualities as well. I enjoyed reading their story, and I’m glad I read the book. I may pick up another by the author as I appreciated the writing talent, but I’m just not totally sold on grabbing everything in this series right away.

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This was my second book by this author and I enjoyed it even more than the last one I read by her (“Man Candy“).

I should provide a disclaimer: I was in the mood for tropes. I write unpredictable, real-life romance with dubious “heroes/heroines”, and as an effort to educate myself and grow as a writer, I was specifically looking for more typical romances with the usual reader journey. To that end, “Irresistible” does not disappoint at all. It had a fair handful of boxes ticked off from the jump, and it says right in the subtitle “(A Small Town Single Dad Romance)“.

The Premise

Former marine Mack is lusting after his sometimes nanny, who also happens to be the boss’ daughter and ten years his junior; meanwhile Frannie is the most capable super-domestic creature that’s haplessly in love with him as well. The endless cooking and effortless childminding were over the top, but cute and fluffy and of course necessary because poor Mack needs all of that saccharine-sweetness in his life. He’s been torturing his three little girls with unhealthy crap and a bad relationship with his ex-wife.

The Pros

The story was a rollicking romp from the first page right to the end, and I breezed through it in a couple of days. Having read another by the same author, I actually felt the familiarity in the writing, and looked forward to the journey. Overall I loved it, thoroughly enjoyed it, and couldn’t put it down. I loved foul-mouthed Mack and naive Frannie, and the kids are adorable scene-stealers. The dialogue is laugh-out-loud funny at times, and the naughty scenes are *ooh* scintillating. I really love how this author manages (yet again) to make the sex scenes sexy without absolute overkill. I also appreciate how she manages to interweave the stories of others, without flinging them at the reader. I genuinely wanted to learn more about all the side characters, from all the tiny kernels she dropped like breadcrumbs throughout the main characters’ scenes. I also enjoyed the growth of Frannie’s character, coming into her own and standing her ground with her family; girl power: woot!

The Cons

I don’t mind cursing, and my own characters curse a LOT, but I must admit that Mack dropping the F-bomb in front of his kids every other minute bothered me a bit. Sure, curse all you want otherwise… but in front of the kids I would have appreciated a bit more restraint. On the plus side, the charities must have been making a killing from that swear jar! I also think some of the trope elements weren’t really necessary — the age difference isn’t appalling, and the “boss’ daughter” element was another extra that didn’t seem to have any real impact here. Finally, the end was a little too swift for my liking; it sped ahead from one thing to another seemingly because it just had to fit that romance box! So I must admit I had some eye-rolling coming down to the very end. These were tiny hiccups though.

Conclusion

I will gladly grab another in this series, or any other series by this author. I was on the fence with the first book by her that I read, but I’m sold now, and became a fan! I signed up to her newsletter, and received the bonus scene to the book, which made me smile. Totally worth it.

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Full disclosure: I was in the mood for tropes. As I recently discussed on my Writer Blog, my own writing is very different with an unpredictable reader journey, so picking up a book that’s EXACTLY what I was referring to (where the title gives it all away) was a “research” effort on my part to look at the market for my own readers.

The Pros & Cons

Fortunately this book exceeded my expectations on many fronts. The tropes, while there, were subverted to some extent — (1) They hadn’t been “best friends” in ages, and (2) Blanca had no idea she was dating her best friend’s ex, which went on for at least half of the story. Far longer than I thought it would, which had its pros and cons. On the plus side, there were a myriad of OTHER issues that came way before that, and were just as important as the trope.

Ethan had quite a lot of damage on his own, without even being “forbidden fruit” — and I would have gladly read an entire novel on the two of them without the bestie-ex factor. There was enough there to flesh out something beautiful. His family issues and office relationship aversion are big enough “hang-ups” on their own! So by the time the “big reveal” came, I was just glad that part was over so it could get to the other good stuff! I liked that the main characters both felt fully developed, and I could easily imagine both their family scenarios — the boisterous, raucous overbearing brotherhood on Blanca’s side, and the quiet strained relationship on Ethan’s side.

I actually had no qualms whatsoever about Sierra (the ex) being bitchy (for some readers, I’m sure this would be an issue) but I did wish there was a greater build-up to her back story to create more tension. However, when it came to the side characters, I wasn’t enjoying them as much as I should have. As the writers noted in an afterword, the “Friends” sitcom element was there, with the guys and girls living in apartments right next to each other and being intertwined inextricably. That shadow of “Friends” was a bit too heavy-handed for me, as it seemed like each side character was painted in the broadest of strokes. There were snippets of everyone but it seemed like caricatures of roles without enough depth or subtlety. I realised that the characters were being developed just enough for “future use” throughout the series, but it felt like they were being thrown at me precisely for that purpose, rather than me being naturally inclined to want to know their stories.

Conclusion

Still, overall, I enjoyed the book, and read through it quickly in a couple of days. The writing was light and airy, the dialogue and sexy scenes are just racy enough without being overkill, and there is enough sweetness to make you smile and stay up late at night reading. The story has enough twists and turns to hook you if you’re not as picky a reader as I am. I’m not immediately craving more from the series, but I’d be happy to read another and would also like to try another series from the same writers.

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This was my first book by this author, but I can promise it won’t be my last. I went in completely blind, and I was thrilled when it blew me away. There were a lot of moments when I really, really, really wanted to stop reading… but I couldn’t. I read it a few sittings over a long cruise with several consecutive sea days, so I had a lot of dedicated time to focus on the story and really feel it. And feel it, I did… feel it, you must.

The Pros & Cons

Quinn and Graham meet under unusual circumstances, both as victims of cheating, and find themselves together later down the line as fated partners, but their relationship is threatened by the daunting sorrow of infertility. The chapters jump from “Then” and “Now” tracing back the couple’s origin story, and it’s a doozy of a heartwarming rollercoaster that — unfortunately — plummets into the darkest depths of despair in their marriage.

I do love “real-life romance” — hell, I’ve got to love it, because I write it! — but this one was a gut-punch I didn’t expect. The writer accurately captures some of the nuances of marital intimacy, familial relationships and so much more — the tiny moments that can pivot everything, and that are often missed in films, books, and just about any other form of representation.

Thank God for the “origin” moments of levity, because honestly it’s a difficult read if not for those. You love the young couple because they’re simply awesome, and they’re meant to be. Graham is knee-bucklingly adorable in his over-the-top moments, and Quinn is a female character you actually enjoy reading about because she’s not “too much” of anything. She feels real. They are easy to love, and it’s heartbreaking when it flashes to the present-time when they’re both so awful.

Still, you can connect with them even in the bad times, and the story is so intricately woven between the two extremes that you feel like you are there with them. The steamy/sexy scenes — both now and then — are perfectly done (even perfect in its awfulness for the “now” moments), and I always appreciate writing that successfully straddles this fine balance with taste and grace.

My only tiny niggle was the ending. I don’t want to have a huge spoiler, but I think the supposed “solution” they found minimalises all they’ve been through in their journey to this point. It felt like something was added on that just didn’t belong there. It almost, almost, almost made me dock from my rating, but I eventually forgave it and gave the story the full five stars because it stayed with me so vividly as I write this weeks later, and I’m sure it’s not a book I’m likely to forget anytime soon.

Conclusion

Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed this read, particularly the writing style that jerks at your organs at times, the symbolism — “Category 5 hurricane” as a marriage, and the entire journey this book took me on. It was a fresh, tough look at real life that leaves a lasting message about who we are, how we can be better partners to our loved ones, and most importantly the overarching truth in all relationships: you are your own worst enemy.

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This is my second book by this author, and I only wish I’d read it first (as it was written first) rather than going backwards. The more recent one I read — “Easy” — stopped my world to such an extent that I don’t think I can even objectively judge another book by her. But I’ll try! Here goes:

The Pros & Cons

“Chasing Stars” was awesome. I love love love love love how you really feel like you’re in these characters’ heads, feeling every conversation and every doubt and every sorrow. The sentences ramble the way my mind does sometimes, and it’s so refreshing to read something that feels like the way you think. When the scenes get sexy, your entire body twinges and ripples with the character’s.

A couple of my faves:

“I need man smell and man arms and man skin and sweat. I just need someone to hold me together and make me feel like nightmares are just nightmares and I’ll be okay.”

“Oh my God. Ares kissed me. I am so happy my insides are coated in glitter and confetti. But I’m also on the edge of tears because it doesn’t change anything. I can’t have him. He’s not mine.”

Nikki’s friendship with Persephone feels so much like one of mine from my past that it’s scary. The supportive, silent friend bolstering the other who clearly has a much better life; the sacrifices we make as young women; and that seesaw of love/hate that make you wonder how you were ever even friends with this person in the first place… yup. Bang on.

Also, Ares’ male stupidity at times was just awesome. Yes, he was a complete clunkhead, but unfortunately that’s kind of how young guys (or any guys, if we’re being entirely honest) can be at times! Both he and Persephone won your hearts by the end though, never mind the up and downs along the way when you want to knock them down.

I also really appreciated all the adult relationships interwoven into the story — Nikki’s mother is terrifying, but is well balanced with Persephone’s and Ares’ mother who treats Nikki like one of her own and even takes on her younger brother as well. The father characters also bring a nice balance to round out the story, showing that past negativity does not necessarily always need to permeate the present and the future, and there is room for growth and change and maturity from both sides of the generational gap.

Conclusion

There were a couple of moments that I was hoping for a *wee* bit more to push me over the top, but overall this was a stellar read and a fabulous debut novel, and I would recommend to anyone needing something that grabs at your emotions and doesn’t let you go until the end.

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It’s rare that I read a book from beginning to end without a single break, and even more rare that I award a trope-filled book with such a high rating.

That’s just some context so you’ll know I mean it when I say — I LOVED this book. It ticks all the “trope” boxes without anything really “different”… but OOH! It does it so, so well.

The Pros & Cons

Despite the hot millionaire man-whore-seeming boss and quasi-virginal assistant trope that has been done to death in modern romance literature, these characters actually bring something fresh and genuine to the genre. You want to love them, and root for them. You feel their dilemmas. You fall into them so easily, and revel in the slightest flash of fire in their dialogue and interaction.

Yes, this story’s been told before… but usually not quite so well. In this case there’s not TOO MUCH domination from the boss angle, and ENOUGH feistiness and reservations from the assistant angle so that you’re not rolling your eyes in annoyance from chapter to chapter (I admit, I tend to do that a lot — and I didn’t, at all, with this one!).

There’s also JUST the right measure of steamy scenes at JUST the right time with JUST the right pacing so it’s not too tame, too soon, or too needlessly pornographic. For once, for ONCE… there is enough F*%$%#$#%KING STORY amongst the sex scenes, to actually enjoy them when you get there! I’m a picky reader — and an even pickier ROMANCE reader — and for once… for ONCE… I approve!

Oh, and no spoilers, but… the flower thing… EPIC!!!

The friendships on both sides also brought a lot of colour and life and laughter to the tale — Zoey’s best friend is believably proudly slutty and yet fiercely protective, and Easton’s crew is believably a bunch of d%&kheads with good hearts! And in both cases their command of dialogue when they meet each other’s friends made me smile. You feel like you know these people. They’re not overdone or overwhelming, but just the right measure of camaraderie and coercion and cockiness to enjoy their scenes in between focusing on the main squeeze! I can see the other books in the series being fleshed out quite easily, and would love to read more.

I do have to be balanced in my reviews, and I’ve gushed to this point, so let me see… my only real niggle that prevented the full 5 stars was that a “significant event” happened pretty late in the last few chapters… so, in terms of pacing it felt like it should have happened earlier, or there should have been a bit more story before the eventual resolution, because the ending felt a *wee* bit rushed.

Conclusion

I wanted just a little more squirming of “will-they-won’t-they-what’s-going-to-happen” before the eventual sigh of relief as it slid into its happily-ever-after. Maybe I was just enjoying it too much for it to end so soon! Nevertheless, I was thrilled for the entire joyride of this book and highly, highly, highly recommend to anyone… and particularly if you are a picky reader who needs something in the romance genre to rock your world!

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This book is by a popular bestselling author and has loads of fabulous reviews, so I was pleased to dive in and looked forward to it. It’s a good enough read that I can easily recommend… but it just didn’t take me nearly as far into a “romance reader high” as I hoped it would.

The Pros & Cons

First, my likes: stylistically, it’s written very well. It opens with a catchy first few lines, and I was hooked! OMG, what an enticing open! I settled in for the story, thinking I was guaranteed the entire range of emotions from swoons to hair-pulling frustrations to emotional highs to crushing lows.

…But it just didn’t happen.

Notably, the sexy parts are sizzling, and if you’re looking for a sexy read that’s minimal on the story, this is perfect for you! But as it dealt with such a heavy, serious topic… the sexy bits seemed oddly placed at times.

Other readers noted (and I agree) that the dark-past-flashback moment shifted WAY too fast into the wild-sex… but that wasn’t even my main sticking point. For me, it was the more subtle things that stood out. Verbal self-deprecation in front of your boss prior to a business event??? Making the first move — on your boss — in public, after insistently turning him down prior to that? Er, okay. It felt like the character had done a complete 180-degree shift from independent-hard-worker to insecure-girl-in-lust. I expected more control… as she kept *saying* she was so controlled, so reserved, so cautious… but really, she wasn’t.

Also, based on the title, I thought there would be some “player” behaviour in the present, but he’s already reformed for awhile by the time he meets her… and her initial “hard to get” persona (which piqued my interest from the blurb) disintegrated disappointingly fast. I like saucy girls with swagger, so I was hoping for more frostiness before they actually get together… more drama, more verbal barbs… more something (their initial meeting was so awesome!). Also, the “mystery” of her dark past was revealed so soon… I had hoped for more build-up to this point!

So overall, though I was enjoying it and kept reading, I didn’t really feel the gut-wrenching drama I’d been looking forward to. The dark past was barely a blip of a shadow in their relationship, as they seemed to be falling over themselves in lusty love despite that. The “action” parts of the plot were subdued, her run-in with the guy from her past was over so quickly, and her parents’ re-entrance into her life was just too simple. There was POTENTIAL here to get me more involved emotionally, but there were parts where I felt like I was having the story told to me, rather than 100% feeling it myself.

Conclusion

I did, however, love the overall message of how love can redeem damage if you find your soulmate. I also really enjoyed the rhythm of the writing, the relationships we glimpse through friends and family, and the general premise of the story. There were also laughable moments (I loved her meeting of the other Walker brother!), and the dialogue throughout was engaging. And ooh… did I mention the sizzling sex? I think I did. So again, if that’s what you need… it’s here for you!

Overall, I enjoyed the book, and it was easy to read in its entirety in a short space of time. It also piques the interest for the other stories in the series, which seem intriguing and I’d be happy to pick up. I liked this one, but I just expected and wanted more drama… more “kaboom”!

*Side note… her panties are WAY too easy to rip off. What kind of cloth are they made of?????*

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This book was awesome and awful and beautiful and ugly at the same time. I finished it in one sitting. And I have feelings. I’m just not entirely sure what these feelings are. I felt schizophrenic reading it, because I teeter-tottered throughout the book. But a review has to convey more than utter confusion, so let me try to be eloquent.

***First I should mention… there is cheating. I’m cool with that (in books!), but just a heads-up if you’re not.***

The Pros & Cons

My likes: I loved that both characters are difficult to love. I hate run-of-the-mill heroes and heroines… that’s just not real life. And sure, we often read for escapism, but I write “real-life romance” so I appreciated reading one as well. But this one is painfully real at times.

Missed chances, mixed signals, hot moments, emotional outbursts, a loooooooonggg drawn out torturous friendship, and frustrating memories of a dead “hero” who was far from the ideal hubby. It had me in an emotional twist, and I wanted to fling my phone at the wall sometimes. But I kept on reading.

There are sweet elements here similar to Ahern’s “P.S. I Love You” with the instructions from beyond the grave… but then the notes reveal awful characteristics. There are elements here of sweet romance… but then it gets really filthy. Oh, and there’s a shocking twist that was a true WTF????? moment. The book cover and blurb led me to believe it would be a sweet romance with maybe a racy moment or two, so as I read on, I was like “OMG, what am I reading?”… But I kept on reading.

From a stylistic point of view, it’s worthwhile to note a lot of the key moments happen in the past before the actual story starts, and the jumps were jarring sometimes. I can see some readers having an issue with it, but I’m a trooper who can roll with the punches… so I kept on reading.

What I didn’t much care for were the overly-heavy FSOG comparisons. The writing, the storyline, and the author’s talent — all great on its own merit, and so it all would have easily survived without that FSOG shadow. Sure, most erotica these days would get compared to that, but in this case it was just *too* on the nose… still, I kept on reading.

And eventually, finally, I finished it.

Conclusion

I must say I loved that the book was unpredictable, that it was unique, and needs to be in its own category. That’s high praise. And I must mention here again that I don’t mind tropes (in this case “friends-to-lovers” & “best-friend’s-ex”)… once there’s something different about it, and this one definitely brings “different” to the table. Dollops of different.

But I must also admit it was a difficult read at times. There’s a LOT to unpack here. You need to prepare yourself before you go in. You will be frustrated. You will have feelings. I’ll let you decide exactly what those feelings are.

Overall, I did enjoy it, and rated it highly (for me) BUT I don’t know if I can handle another by the author anytime soon. This romance was RAW… I think I need to read about murder and crime after this! 🙂

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The Pros & Cons

I flew through this book in record time. It felt much shorter than its actual length due to the short, choppy chapters and fast-paced writing. It starts off a little slow but quickly picks up pace and strength as the writing flows. It begins as a simple tale: a weirdo seeking justice, and then when he picks the wrong guy to mess with… it goes dark, and fast. I didn’t expect it to get that dark, but it was a welcome surprise!

I’ve read other reviews mentioning the main character’s poor judgement and actions, and I agree… but characters aren’t there to be perfect or knowledgeable or (to put it bluntly) that bright. They’re just people, and people can be misguided, foolish and rash. Which he is. Case in point: it’s one thing to overshare to just about everyone about his “hobby”… but it’s another thing entirely to announce himself to the predators he targets.

I’d hoped he’d remain anonymous and that the “bad guy” would track him down in spite of that… but it was far too easy for him to wind up paying the price for his stupidity. This was my only sticking point… but still, I put it into perspective as I read. This is a twenty-something-year-old guy with serious emotional damage from his past. He’s not going to be the most eloquent, thoughtful or forward-thinking, so he’s not likely to be the most sympathetic character. Readers… deal with it! 😛

Kyle is NOT the typical hero figure, and for half of the book I was wondering if he’d been mistaken about his father, or if his motives were cloudier than his own concept of himself as a vigilante hero. The writer leaves you guessing right up until the end. There are head-spinning twists and turns that leave you breathless, and thankfully the payoff is a satisfactory ending despite the journey that had its gut-wrenching moments.

From the way it was going, I was actually expecting a darker end (and that could have easily worked in this instance) but there was a blossoming emotion of levity after all that heavy darkness — a bit *too* saccharine-sweet maybe, given the emotional thrill of a rollercoaster that preceded it. That’s a really, really tiny gripe though.

Conclusion

This was overall a stellar read, with a refreshing writing style and a plot with enough of a punch to keep the reader intrigued from beginning to end. I’ll recommend to anyone that can stomach a darker tale.

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My first MMF romance/erotica, better than expected

The Pros & Cons

As my first time reading this type of book, I went into this expecting the worst, but was pleasantly surprised.

I did get a free copy, and I admit that I likely wouldn’t have read this otherwise, as I’m not familiar with the sub-genre. But the opening page drew me in, and the writing style is eloquent, steady and easy to follow.

Despite the three viewpoints, I did not get lost figuring out who was speaking at any given time. The story was well rounded with enough background and nuance to have a solid story beyond just being all about sex.

The main characters communicated well and I liked that the conflict was resolved quickly without dragging it out over half the book. I also loved the portrayal of modern religion: that you can be observant of your religion, but allow for adaptation rather than extremism.

My only peeve was that it seemed unlikely that a gay couple adding a woman for procreation would jump into sex without even a doctor’s visit… especially as Shahid worked as a nurse in a hospital. If he had ANY other job, yeh, okay. Seems silly to nitpick, but it did bother me!

Conclusion

Nevertheless, I enjoyed the book overall, and it’s a nice story. I look forward to read more by this author.

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The Pros & Cons

I enjoyed this book for the most part, and again — it’s one of those I really wish I could have rated higher. Clearly I’m in the minority because it’s by a bestselling author, and most of the reviews are stellar. There’s a lot to love in it, but as I’m a writer, I am an even more picky reader! I want more. I demand more. And this one had so much potential to blow my mind, but just fell short.

The dialogue is engaging and the writing is really good, easily flowing between the past and present and allowing you to get involved with the characters. I love the interaction between the two main characters, but there were parts of it that just felt choppy.

The tragic event at the beginning was a shock — and a well-written one that had me riveted to the screen. But then, it was quickly followed by a lot of bad behaviour on all parts. An engagement fizzles into nothingness, with little remorse it seems, and everyone seemed far too okay with it. I forgave that, as I did love the main pair, who clearly had a lot more history and love between them.

But then there was a great build-up that crescendoed into… well, not much. He couldn’t stay; she couldn’t leave. But then she did. And that apparently fixed the entire conflict. The ending just happened way, way, way too fast. They jumped ahead two years. What????? No. I waited through this entire rollercoaster for more than this! I wanted more. I needed more.

Conclusion

It continues into Dean’s story, and I would be happy to read on in the series. The preview of his story is just stunning. So I just hope that there’s redemption somewhere down the line because I felt like I didn’t get the time, energy and effort I invested into this book.

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I’ll admit this isn’t my typical genre to read. While I often watch crime movies or TV shows, it’s rare that I’ll pick up a book to read on the subject. This is because I find it’s difficult to translate the action of the criminality of “hood life” to paper. That said — WOW. This knocked that notion out of the park.

The Pros & Cons

I had this book for awhile (received a free copy upon sign-up to author’s newsletter) and finally delved into it today. I breezed through the entire novella in a couple of hours.

It was raw, gritty, and felt so real. The small touches were so detailed: the description of a chicken box blowing, dust coating a room, the smell of weed, the sounds and vibrations of music pumping, the colours and textures of the sheets on the king-sized bed. The undercurrent of danger is palpable from beginning to end. It’s rare that you stumble across writing so vivid that it seems seamless to transpose to film.

Conclusion

This was a fast-paced and powerful read, and I highly recommend. I only wish it was a little longer. The ending was a gut-punch.

But it leads into the “Target” series (and introduces the main “Target” character in this one), so I can see a lot more happening in this world — and look forward to it the next time I’m feeling up for a gritty read like this.

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I think the genre of this was supposed to be adult romance, but I call it like I see it. Which is fine, if that’s what you’re looking for. I was hoping for more story than sex with this one, so I was disappointed.

The Pros & Cons

The tropes were predictable — best friend’s sister, stalker mystery (which wasn’t really mysterious), bad boy, virginal girl — who suddenly turns into not-so-virginal girl the moment he enters the picture. The “best friend” was nowhere around for most of it, so the title and overall premise left me wondering if parts of the story were tossed in JUST to hit the tropes.

I don’t mind a trope or two, if there’s something different in it. The “different” in here only seemed to be that despite “needing” a bodyguard (the whole premise of the plot) — woop! woman power!… and possible *spoiler alert* — she ends up having to save herself.

…Which is probably because her “bodyguard” seemed to only be popping in for the sexy times, for the most part. He was off doing a zillion other things, leaving her unprotected a lot. So plot-wise, it had some bits lacking there. I kept hoping for more story, but all I got was more sex.

Like I said — GREAT… if that’s what you’re looking for. And sometimes it IS what I’m looking for. Just not with this book, as there was potential to have a LOT more drama and conflict. For instance, I hoped that the relationship would have been discovered by accident by their friends and families… rather than it just being TOLD over the phone. I could see many more moments like this where I needed MORE STORY… I could see MORE happening… but… it just didn’t. The folks who love the sexy bits have a lot to enjoy — and it is sizzling — but it was a bit much for me.

Conclusion

Nevertheless, the writing itself is quite good, the story is easy to follow and keep turning the pages, and there are punches of humour and laugh-out-loud moments, so I did enjoy the book overall. I may pick up another in the series, but I just hope it has a bit more story than this one.

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I liked the overall premise of this book, so I’ll give it a solid 3 stars for effort… but honestly, I felt like the story just ran out of steam. Literally and figuratively.

The Pros & Cons

It’s a women’s fiction, so I took that in stride and set my expectations accordingly in terms of how much “relationship” to expect. In this case, not much. I’ve read various levels of “relationship” and “sex” in this genre (and I write both into my own “women’s fiction/romance” series), but the point of the genre is the development of women, so I’ll be fair in judging on that basis.

Here’s what I DID like: I loved the characters of the village — they each seemed to have their own story from the glimpses we see through Ava’s story. I liked how Ava evolved from the beginning of the story as a self-centred trophy widow to a caring, nurturing person that even went the extra mile to help someone she barely knew who reminded her of herself, and then to make an effort to smooth things over with her late husband’s daughter.

The female relationships are strong, sweet, and caring — from the elderly Lady Stokeley in her 80s to the young Alice in her early 20s. All of this was beautifully done, and I could just imagine the maternity-clothes parade, the giggling ladies, the tea party; all of these — truly lovely. This was all nicely done and brought a lot of colour and life to the reader’s imagination.

My problem was the love interest, Jace. I liked that he had a dark past, and that he was not the typical “hero” — this was AWESOME. More books need to have characters like this that aren’t perfect. I was happy with him as a character, mind you. My issue was the relationship between him and Ava. Relationships need not be the focus in a women’s fiction, sure. But the problem with this one was that it seemed like it would be… but then this didn’t pay off.

If there was no guy at all, I’d have been okay with that. But having him there seemed like he was tossed in last-minute, at times, to fill some “there must be a man” quota. I’ve complained about books with way too much sex (to the level of gratuitous!) but I really wish this one had a *bit* more steam. Not sex, necessarily. Just steam. Something. Anything beyond friendship that blooms into a sudden love declaration from seemingly nowhere!

Conclusion

Sigh. There was potential for this book to do more for me, but I did enjoy it for the most part. I would perhaps read on to learn more about the other women of Willoughby — I just prefer if the men were kept out of it entirely so the focus wouldn’t stray from the beauty of the female relationships.

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Unfortunately for the book’s genre, the comparison to the Harry Potter series is inevitable, which is perhaps its downfall. Preteen children coming into powers — check. Family legacies and elderly know-it-alls with lots of powers — check. Magical castle-house and environs — check. Evil antagonists wanting to steal powers — check.

The plot twist was a doozy, and I expected something totally different! But then, after the plot twist, the ending felt rushed. I know it’s meant to continue into another book, but I wish there was a bit more writing in this one to tie things up.

That said, there were parts of the story that were fresh, the descriptions of the house were imaginative, the brotherly relationship was sweet, the pacing was good, the dashes of humour were interwoven nicely, and the writing style clearly shows talent.

Overall, it was an easy and enjoyable read. I just expected too much. I admit I may not be the ideal target for this book, but I would highly recommend it to preteen children, as they may not be quite as picky as older HP fans.

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I don’t mind a series, or books that end in a cliffhanger — I do, however, mind “piecemeal” stories that don’t even give you enough in the first installment to really want to bite into the larger story and continue reading. So that was my major problem here.

The Pros & Cons

The pacing of these first 158 pages is my main issue — it is PACED for a much longer story. The inner day-to-day flow, the dialogue, the events that unfold — it needed at least 30% more pages to feel somewhat complete as a full story arc. Anyway, let’s focus on what WAS here.

The characters were great, and the dialogue was punchy and on point. I loved the elderly Aunt as well as Blake’s teenage daughter, and even Addison’s friends — these scenes were quite sweet. The development of her career as a baker was beautiful — just to imagine being able to start your life over and do something you actually love… I liked reading about that. I also appreciated that both of the main characters were mature and able to understand where the other was coming from — he has a child who he must put first, and she’s coming out of a bad marriage with emotional baggage. Despite there being an instant attraction, it did take awhile to bubble into something, and I was grateful it didn’t go TOO fast with that, as it would have felt unrealistic given their circumstances.

It’s just, well… honestly, not much really happened.

Conclusion

At only 158 pages, I didn’t and couldn’t have expected too much, but I have read even shorter novels that had more story. In fact, I just reviewed a crime novella that blew me away — and in just 144 pages! So it IS possible to write a story in a short form.

…This, however, wasn’t that. This is a well-written INTRODUCTION to a story. It just wasn’t enough of a story in its own right.

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I read this book easily in a few hours over two days, and enjoyed it.

The Pros & Cons

The background of the pilgrimage provided a nice context for the reader to imagine, as did the description of the luxury hotel. The steamy moments were not overdone, and had the right level of heat that I actually read through them rather than skipping through as I often do (I’m not a prude — I just think some writers WAY overdo it for no reason at all, and what’s meant to be sexy just turns out to be repetitive).

The characters were believable and (THANK GOD) both mature, and their connection felt genuine and deep. I appreciated that there was no stupidness keeping them apart — just the direction life sometimes takes. The sibling interaction was also great, and I have no doubt that all the other books in this series will also be rich with these family relationships.

The only reason I docked a star was that the the storyline’s overall conflict seemed too simple. Like, all along I thought something would HAPPEN… there was a build-up. But no real “action” or “event” led to the eventual resolution, so the ending felt rushed.

Conclusion

Nevertheless, overall the writing style is strong, the pacing is nicely done, and it was a good weekend read. I look forward to more by this author.

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First M/M romcom I’ve read… enjoyed! 

Definitely not my usual cup of tea… but I got a free copy and thought, why not?

I finished it in half a day while at the office (not much work got done!)……

If you are someone who offends easily, this is not the book for you. I’m not, so I’ll be fair.

Writing : It rambles on at times, and could use a closer eye at editing. Slight distraction but nothing *too* glaring. I enjoyed the rollicking adventure of scene-jumping.

Storyline : not the best, but the writing is hilarious and makes up for it. Some of the best sex scenes I’ve read (and better than many F/M scenes I’ve read).

Overall, there’s something very unique and special in this book.

Worth the read!

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I accepted a review copy with NO time on my hands to read, and figured I’d get around to it in a couple of weeks… but then I started browsing the first few pages and found myself caught up in the story. (There went my plans for the day!)

The Pros & Cons

This was an easy one-sit read with fast-paced writing — sometimes a little TOO fast, which was the only reason I docked a star. It seemed like some parts zipped by so quickly that the reader learns in past tense but didn’t get a chance to experience it. I love stories like this, and I could feel the POTENTIAL to get me 100% emotionally involved, so these “passive” moments became its only drawback… as I wanted more!

When the couple finally gets together, the pace seems to shift drastically, and takes you along for the ride. The relationship feels real (all of the relationships, actually), and it’s touching and emotional. The steamy scenes are tastefully written, which I appreciate thoroughly as it manages the delicate balance before tipping off into the deep end of “gratuitous” as so often happens when writing about older/younger couples.

One more thing (nothing lacking re: the writer or the story; just my own thoughts!): Given Casey’s *swoon-worthy* involvement with her kids and the couple’s age disparity, I’m surprised the topic never came up about any plans to have kids of his own. But hey, maybe their story isn’t done yet, or maybe we can just imagine they’ll figure that part out in time.

Conclusion

Anyway, all in all this was a good women’s fiction story, tastefully done and well written. Totally worth chucking all your plans for the day!

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3.5 stars… close to 4.

I really, really, really wanted to like this book more — and thought I would, as it’s by a popular bestselling author. It was good, and the writing itself was excellent, but the storyline had the potential to be great and just fell short for me.

The Pros & Cons

I’m grateful that the male character Jaime wasn’t unnecessarily super-alpha as many male leads seems to be these days, and loved his character. He was just the right mix of cocky and cute to stay with you long after the book was over.

…But I struggled with the female character Quinn. Mind you, I LOVE having characters that are difficult to love, so I have to explain this properly. She seems to be all over the place, getting what she wants but wanting it her way, and having what she needs and pushing it away. No problem; I can be like that sometimes, so I was happy reading about a messed-up chick for no evident reason. It was refreshing and I was going along for the ride. It’s just… well, I thought it was all going to lead to one big reveal… but it just didn’t. I kept waiting for that part of the plot… and it didn’t happen. She figures out her past led to how she is today, but her past was so banal that is isn’t even a spoiler for me to mention it here. It went from “Let me try therapy” to “Hey, I’m cured”… and the reader is like “OK… WHAT JUST HAPPENED?”

So an entire star fell off for me, because of that. It was going SO, SO, SO GOOD… until that point. It’s a shame, as I wanted to give this a higher rating.

Conclusion

Apart from that major plot point in my mind, I thoroughly enjoyed this read. The writing is fast-paced, the characters are easy to fall into, the sexy scenes are just the right mix of naughty and sweet, the supporting characters fill it out nicely, and it ticked a lot — a lot — a lot — of boxes for me. The author is talented, I understand how she’s so popular, and I would love to read more by her.

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Among relationships, random sex, budding parenthood, runaways, drug addicts, kiddie porn, and incest and molestation so casual and commonplace it is its own character in the book, Ezra “Easy” and his best friend Jake “Love” both endure their first real loves and turn from boys to men in this novel.

The fresh, resplendently rambling narration hops from one thing to the next, and still flows so beautifully to weave a story that is original and heart-wrenching and darkly funny all at once. All of the main characters are physically visible to the reader, practically leaping off the page.

I don’t even know how to categorise this book — it’s part Young Adult, part Erotica, part Action, part Drama. I can’t remember the last time I read a book cover to cover in one sitting, nor can I remember the last time I gave a 5 star rating. I thoroughly enjoyed it, and feel like my life has shifted somewhat, by the time I was finished. This is exactly what a novel is supposed to do. Can’t wait to read more from this author.

Disclaimer: I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review. However, I have zero obligation to say nice things, as I do not know the author personally!

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