October, 2018 - Sacha T. Y. Fortuné

Let’s Hurt Tonight: “Bring The Pain” Writing

“Tell me all of the things that you couldn’t before
Don’t walk away, don’t roll your eyes
They say love is pain, well darling, let’s hurt tonight…”

— One Republic: “Let’s Hurt Tonight”

Every time I hear this song, I think of my Book 2 main characters Darren and Luisa.

My beta readers already know the scene I’m talking about!!!

It happens about midway through their full story — when they each come to their explosive point and all the trauma of their relationship — all the elephants in the room, all the pain of the last four years, rise up as they finally TALK to each other.

In any marriage, in any relationship, communication is key.

This “Pandora’s Poison” of their marriage became that way because they didn’t talk to each other.

Darren had suspicions but no proof, and waited too long to confront her.

Luisa left her lover in the lurch, the moment it seemed like it was too much for her. She crawled back to her husband, begging him not to turn her away.

But he didn’t ask questions then. He didn’t want to know.

Now, he does.

 

The Truth is a Monster…

Darren didn’t leave her after her affair, but it took a heavy toll on him to do so.

Luisa never got her head sorted out, about what she felt for Gianni, when she left him and went back to Darren.

Darren can’t understand why his wife became this different person, with her lover, that she never was with him.

Luisa is positive she wasn’t the only one with a wandering eye, in their marriage.

In Book 1, Luisa tells Darren that he loves Nicole…

Darren hates the fact that she betrayed him, worse than he even thought she did.

Luisa despises the fact that she loves her husband.

Darren has gambled everything for love — which Luisa doesn’t know — and he’s determined to get her to speak.

Luisa wants to walk away and just leave — but he won’t let her, until he knows the truth.

The truth is a monster, sitting in the room with them, finally unleashed.

 

My characters wrote this scene…

They are at their absolute worst.

They’re loud. They’re angry. They’re upset.

It’s… intense. It’s… WOW.

I’ve rewritten this scene so many times, and cried so many times!

Yes! My characters whispered me this scene, over and over, changing which way it went, lengthening it, changing the ending, adding in pieces… WHEW!

They were so adamant about it being precise. They did a good job.

I didn’t write that scene. They did. It’s my best piece of writing, ever, I think — but THEY wrote it.

Phew! I can’t wait to share that scene, with my readers.

Let’s Hurt Tonight” — yep, that’s pretty accurate.

I’m so freaking excited for their story! *Eek*

In the meanwhile, I’ll go back to singing their theme song…

“Tell me all of the things that you couldn’t before
Don’t walk away, don’t roll your eyes
They say love is pain, well darling, let’s hurt tonight…”

 

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“Do I Need an Author Website?”

When I saw the question, quite innocently posed on a Facebook Author group, my biggest surprise was that the responses were NOT a resounding “YES”!

To me, it was. I mean, of COURSE you need a website.

Granted, I make a living building and managing websites, so I may be a *wee* bit biased, but this one should be a no-brainer!

For any business — and, make no joke about it, being an author (particularly a self-published one) is a BUSINESS! — you need to have a website.

 

Don’t be at the mercy of other platforms

The poster’s logic was that — “Well, I have a Bookbub profile, a Goodreads profile, a Facebook page, an Instagram account… just so many things to manage! And I’m so not techy…”

Yeah, honey, I hear you… but you need to buckle up and get techy, and fast — or pay someone to do it for you.

Another argument from other posters was: “Well, I’VE never sought out an author website, not even for my favourite authors. Who goes to these things anymore, when there’s social media?”

But, even if you yourself don’t visit author websites, how do you know readers don’t? What about reviewers, filmmakers, a magazine writer looking for new talent, or even other bloggers that may be interested in linking to your site?

Sure, you have an ideal “reader” in mind, but you’re only limiting yourself.

You can’t just only put yourself where you THINK people will be. You need to put yourself in a good position for them to find you, whichever way they want to.

Ask yourself this: if Facebook or Instagram were to go belly-up tomorrow, what would happen to the following you’ve built up there?

Or, even more common lately: what if they change their algorithm (a seemingly daily habit by Facebook) and your fans can’t see your posts anymore?

Yep. A very scary, and very real possibility.

When you leave your following at the mercy of a company that has no interest in your personal success, anything can happen.

 

A website is your soapbox, your foundation

A website should be your key point of reference as a professional of any kind.

As a writer, a website should be your home on the web where your online presence can shine. It is the first assurance to your reader or possible reviewer that your work is of a high quality.

Think of your website like the foundation to a house.

It’s your homebase — a digital property you own and control, where your loyal fans gather. It’s where you direct all your traffic, where you can best sell your products the way you want to.

It’s where all roads should lead back to, regardless of the digital footprints you’ve stamped around all over the internet.

When you post a blog to your website, you can share that on your Facebook or Instagram page. When you add a chapter excerpt, you can send your fans there to collect it.

When you publish your book, a new reader that stumbled upon your website should be able to hop across to your purchase page on Amazon.

When you want to share your frustration, or give out advice to other aspiring writers, you can write something on your website and then drop a link to it on LinkedIn or your other social media sites.

A website is the one place you won’t have to categorise your book and choose where it should go.

It’s your soapbox. It’s where you stand and tell the world who you are, what you write, and why they should buy your book.

It’s the one place you get to tell your FULL story, with no limitations, the way you want it to be told.

 

Writers just want to write…

Okay, so now that we’ve established you DO need to have a website, it’s important to note that, as pointed out by this fellow blogger:

An author website has a lofty goal: it needs to not just be, but also needs to perform and respond.

It can feel like a HUGE time-suck to build all the content across a myriad of platforms, but if there’s one thing you shouldn’t sacrifice, it’s your author website.

Of course, writers just want to write.

But in today’s world, you can’t just write and put work out and hope someone buys it. You need to hone your craft — and a key part of honing your craft is ORGANISING the honing of your craft.

That’s what an author website does.

Since authors spend most of their time fine-tuning their masterpieces, they may not always put a lot of thought into their websites, which is a shame.

A website needs to fulfill your needs as a writer… you can’t just throw anything up there and hope it sticks!

 

Maximise your website potential

Outline what your goals are for your site. A few key goals for authors should be:

  • Newsletter sign-ups — I can’t stress this enough. If you launched a book to people who’ve already shown interest in your writing, your chance of them buying it will be much higher.
  • Reader magnet — this can be tied into your newsletter. Basically, when the visitor signs up, they automatically receive a free book, short story, or chapter excerpt. By giving them a reason to sign up, you’ve hooked them with a freebie and also shown them a taste of your writing so they know what to expect.
  • Author Blog — you don’t need to write an opus every day, but a few hundred words on a weekly or biweekly basis just to let people know what you’re up to and keep you top of mind. If you can’t think of anything to write yourself, here’s a handy list of ideas.
  • Work In Progress plugs — set up a page and start talking about your Work in Progress — even if it’s light years away from completion. Start talking about it from now! (I’ve been telling y’all about my Book 2, Book 3 and Book 4, even before I published Book 1!)
  • Character Platforms — these are especially useful if you have a series. Let readers know who your characters are. (You can check out all my Hart & Cole characters here.)
  • Author Interviews — useful no matter what you’ve written. Answer some FAQs and let readers know your thoughts on the book you’ve written. Why did you write it? What’s it about? (You can check out my Hart & Cole interview here.)
  • Chapter Excerpts — awesome for new and established authors, to show readers what’s coming up (Book 1’s first 2 chapters available here).
  • Contact info — make yourself available to your readers. Add links or buttons to any social media sites or sites where you have an author profile. Let them know you want reviews, input, discussion, comments, anything. Just ask! (Here’s mine – feel free to connect!)
  • Your personality — who are you? You need to show yourself a bit, whether through your “About Me” or the voice of your blog. Readers want to connect with you, and establish trust before they click on “Buy”.

Tell Your Story — before you Sell Your Story.

Finally… the best part of your website is that you get to track its success.

Pop some analytics code on it, and see what pages your visitors are flocking to. Are they interested in chapter excerpts, newsletter sign-ups, video trailers?

They’re your readers. They’re your future fans.

A website lets you find out what they want — and give it to them. So, get cracking!

…And if you do need some techy help to crank out your website, just drop me a line here.

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Fear & Flight with Writing

I hate flying.

But if you’re a traveller, you have to bear with the means of transport to get there. Yep… airplanes.

I began writing this post while on an airplane kicking off my mega-vacation — Ft. Lauderdale, Florida, U.S.A. and my old stomping ground of London, England. 4 flights and 3 weeks later, I’m now back home — and yep, I’m still not a fan of flying!

I could tell you a zillion things I don’t like about flying. Off the top of my head:

  • Getting to the airport early and waiting forever
  • Getting to the airport late (or being in the wrong place in the airport) and dashing to get to where you need to go
  • Uncertainty about if you’ll end up with the worst seat-mate ever, on a long flight
  • Cramped spaces — I’ve never flown first/business class; maybe one day!
  • Loss of control — having to leave your safety completely in the hands of a stranger you haven’t met and perhaps haven’t even seen when you boarded
  • Turbulence — that moment when you are 100% positive you ARE going to die!
  • Packing — I usually start too early, and I always always overpack
  • Repacking on the way back and going crazy trying to make everything fit
  • Airplane bathrooms. Nothing further needed.
  • Airport bathrooms. Yep. Same here.
  • That moment when the customs agent is scoping you out, and you and all start wondering if you’re a criminal!

So yeah… not a fan of flying!

But once you get land, once you get there… there’s relief.

 

Taking Flight with Writing

I guess that’s what the writing process is, sometimes.

Just like with flying, I could name more than a zillion things I don’t like about the post-publication phase of being a writer.

Chilling with my book in Wandsworth Common, London

I’m not a fan of marketing myself. Everything seems to be stacking up against me as I swim in this vacuum of knowledge I didn’t realise I didn’t have, until it’s called for and I realise I don’t!

Actually getting your name out there takes hard work and a LOT of legwork.

You’re trying to be friendly and approachable [social media], not offend anyone [author groups], be a technical wizard [the bajillion websites to sign up and social media specs to follow], a marketing guru and queen of promotion [Amazon/Facebook ads] — all while shopping your soul around to strangers!

I’ve been stomping around in cyberspace for about two months now, accumulating quite the Digital Author footprint on what seems like a zillion sites.

I’ve been creating content like a mofo, spending far too long debating what to post and what not to post and what to reveal and what to hold back.

I’ve been cross-pollinating my social media and wondering — would I be pissed off if I followed someone on three forums who posted the same thing I’m tired of seeing?

So… yeah… make no joke, being a self-published writer is EXHAUSTING.

…BUT, I’m loving it.

 

Gimme more of that Author Crack!

Just like travelling, I can’t get enough of this writing journey, this author crack that I’ve been bingeing on for the past 2 months.

Just like travelling, I have to bear with the “flying” part and the “fear” part, to get to the good stuff.

Because despite the *awful* moments of self-doubt that are almost as bad as airplane toilets and turbulence, there’s also the great moments…

  • When you finally DO publish (a huge, HUGE accomplishment! — don’t let anyone dampen your spirits as to how HUGE this is!)
  • When you finally DO sell some books (even just a trickle — every one counts!)
  • Making awesome writer friends and knowing you’re not alone
  • When a new reader reaches out saying he/she can’t get enough of my characters!

…WOW. Yep, relief.

Someone gets me. Someone gets them.

I’ve done my job.

I’ve taken flight.

 

 

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